f1-gast wrote:Ok i need some feedback, i finished the story about Eyckmans, can be downloaded here https://mega.co.nz/#!b15X1JyD!Clf4RQ8oO ... nSxRjfDwKI
is it oke ?
Should it write diffrent ?
Gramatically it needs quite a lot of work, maybe by someone that has English as their first language (i.e. I can do this). Also maybe you should use your Dutch connections to go find out some more information! Is Wim really telling the truth? Or is he just a bit ashamed that he tried and failed to get an F1 team going?
Also, the pages should probably have an accuracy classification, as in, whether a team was merely rumoured, only had some brief plans, had made it all the way to production, all the way to a race weekend, etc.
So, you could have something like; Rumoured / Concept / Stillborn / Completed
So, for example, Eyckmans F1 would only be rumoured, Trebron would be a Concept, the Honda RA099 would be Stillborn and the Lola T97/30 would be Completed.